Who?
November 17, 2021
Who are you to judge me?
The one who left me
Abused me
Manipulated me
You don’t get to know me
You don’t get to be apart of my life
You don’t get to have a say
You neglected me
You replaced me
You abandoned me
So, who are you to judge me?
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Anna Dabrowski • Dec 3, 2021 at 8:15 am
I love this piece, especially the repetition of starting each line with “you.”
I like how the poem created a wavy shape (I don’t know if this is intentional)
Are you familiar with circular poems? this one definitely is one.
Addelayde Ross • Nov 29, 2021 at 5:51 pm
Very insightful, Kerringtyn. Not all things said are positive. I like how you took the truth and wrote it into a poem that people of all ages can look to. Thanks for sharing.
This also relates to bullying and just overall respect. People shouldn’t judge and I like the message of anti-judging that you are putting out.